Qs emerge from G 10日上午在最后跟帖有疑问 Thanx ！
[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b][color=red]GWD-10-Q1.[/color][/b] [/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, [u]minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice[/u] in socioeconomically deprived areas.[/size][/font][/size]
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[color=blue][b][font=Tahoma][size=9pt]Black Americans are, on the whole, about twice[color=black] [/color][/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9pt][color=black]as likely as[/color] [/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9pt]White Americans [/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9pt][color=black]to[/color] [/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9pt]develop high blood pressure. This likelihood also holds for westernized Black Africans when compared to White Africans.[/size][/font][/b][/color]
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[/size][size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]A.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]minority graduates are nearly[b][color=purple] four times more likely than[/color][color=darkgreen][color=purple] [/color][/color][color=red]are[/color][/b] other graduates [color=darkred][b]in planning to[/b][/color] practice[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]minority graduates are nearly [color=purple][b]four times as likely as[/b][/color] other graduates[color=darkred][b] to plan on[/b][/color] practicing[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice[/size][/font]
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[size=5][size=4]1、蓝字部分是某人给出的例子，因为他支持选C，这题讨论的乌烟瘴气[/size][/size]
[size=5][size=4]2、我选的是A，其主要原因就是因为有[/size][font=Tahoma][color=#ff0000][b]are[/b][/color][/font][/size]
[b][font=Tahoma][size=4][color=black]3、请师公把彩色字的部分讲下吧[/color][/size][/font][/b]
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[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]While digging in the Egyptian desert, [u]huge fossil bones have been found by paleontologists, which appears to have been [/u]the second most massive dinosaur that ever lived.[/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]D.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]paleontologists have found huge fossil bones[b] from what appears to be[/b][/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]E.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]paleontologists have found huge fossil bones[color=purple][b], which are from what appear to be[/b][/color][/size][/font][/size]
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[b][font=Tahoma][color=blue]题目的原型是：纽约时报的一句话改动：[/color][/font][/b]
[font=Tahoma][color=#0000ff]Digging at an oasis in the Egyptian desert, paleontologists have found huge fossil bones [b]of what[/b] they say [b]appears to [/b]have been the second most massive dinosaur that ever lived.
[/color][/font][font=Tahoma][color=black]1、我选的D，但是[/color][/font][font=Tahoma][size=2][size=4]我搞不清from还原在哪里 what应该引导的是主从.....[/size][/size][/font]
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[font=Tahoma][size=4]2、E有点啰嗦吧[/size][/font]
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[color=red][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]GWD-10-Q21[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt] [/size][/font][/b][/color]
[/size][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][size=5][color=magenta][b]Despite[/b][/color][/size] the [u]growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers will[/u] still use travel agents.[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]growing number[/b] of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives [b]are convinced[/b] that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers [b][color=darkgreen]will[/color][/b][/size][/font]
[/size][size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]B.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]growing number[/b] of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives [b]are convinced[/b] , just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, that many travelers [b][color=darkgreen]would[/color][/b][/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]growing number[/b] of people purchasing plane tickets online, airline executives[b] are convinced[/b] , just as one-third of bank customers still [b]prefer[/b] human tellers[b] as compared to[/b] automatic teller machines, many travelers [b][color=green]will[/color][/b][/size][/font]
[/size][size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]D.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b][color=purple]fact that[/color][/b] [b]the number of[/b] people purchasing plane tickets online [b]is [/b]growing, airline executives [b]are convinced[/b], just as one-third of bank customers still [b]prefer[/b] human tellers [b]as compared to[/b] automatic teller machines, that many travelers [b][color=darkgreen]would[/color][/b][/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b][color=purple]fact that[/color] the number of [/b]people who purchase plane tickets online [/size][/font][b][font=Tahoma][size=10.5pt]are[/size][/font][/b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt] growing, airline executives [b]are convinced[/b] that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers compared with automatic teller machines, many travelers [b][color=darkgreen]would[/color][/b][/size][/font][/size]
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[b][font=Tahoma]如下疑问S：::p3 觉得这题乱糟糟[/font][/b]
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[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=4]1 在OG里，growing number 不受宠 ，可是我排除ABC的时候，只是觉得DE更舒服些[/size][/font][/size]
[font=Tahoma][size=4]2 都是[size=2][size=4][b]are convinced[/b][/size] ，后面跟[size=4] will 好于 would[/size] [/size][/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=4]3 一开始E 中are错了，这样一来，选哪个好呢？[/size][/font]
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[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]The single-family [b]house[/b] constructed by the Yana, a Native American people who lived in what is now northern California, [b][color=darkgreen]was[/color][/b] conical in shape,[b] its framework[/b] of poles [b]overlaid[/b] [/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]with slabs of bark, either cedar or pine,[b] and[/b] [u]banked with dirt to a height of[/u] three to four feet.[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]A.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]banked with dirt[color=navy][b]to a height of [color=magenta]1 [/color][/b][/color][color=#000000]选这个和overlaid平行,修饰framework，构架倾斜 且 to a height of 是个固定搭配[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]B.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]banked with dirt as high as that of[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]banked them with dirt to a height of[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]was banked with dirt as high as [color=#ff00ff] 2 [/color][/b][color=#000000]选这个 was banked 和 was 平行，共同修饰house ，房屋倾斜 [/color][/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]was banked with dirt as high as that of[/size][/font][/size]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 Rhine-3- 于 2008-9-10 11:30 编辑 [/i]] [color=DarkGreen]GWD1-Q23:
Past assessments of the Brazilian rain forest have used satellite images to tally deforested areas, where farmers and ranchers have clear-cut and burned all the trees, but such work has not addressed either logging, [u]which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning[/u] down individual trees but do not denude the forest.
A. which is the removal of only selected trees, as well as surface fires, burning[/color]
[color=Red]B. which removes only selected trees, or surface fires that burn [/color]
[color=DarkGreen]C. which removes only selected trees, along with surface fires that burn
D. [b] removing only selected trees, or surface fires, burning 感觉B很舒服 就选了 D呢？[/b]
E. removing only selected trees, as well as surface fires that burn [/color]
感觉 B 很舒服表示你的语感很好。D 错就因为 removing 不是修饰 logging 的，而是修饰前面整个分句的，结果语无伦次。
[[i] 本帖最后由 Asrgbf 于 2008-9-2 08:59 编辑 [/i]] [color=DarkGreen]GWD1-Q34:b
Although [u]people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their[/u] [color=Red]death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.[/color]
A. people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B. people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C. fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their
D. the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
E. the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the
威问题：
1 E和D中的 介词短语the rate of 的后面是不是 最好不要接复杂的结构？
2 the rate of后 是不是表述不清？ 比如：F的rate和US比较 还是F的rate和US的rate比较 以前好像问过[/color]
D、E 不对是因为 of 后面要跟名词，但必须是能够有 rate 的名词。D 那里跟着的是 fatty foods consumed in France and the United States。consumed . . . 是定语，所以 of 的宾语是 fatty foods。fatty foods 是没有 rate 的。E 也是这样，名词还是 fatty foods，people consuming 还是定语。
这样用 rate of 才对：the rate of increase、the rate of decrease、rate of reproduction 等等。 GWD3-Q39: [color=red] A[/color]
[u]Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,[/u] get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride.
A. Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
B. Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, they cost less,
C. Minivans carry as many as seven passengers, in comparison with most sport utility vehicles, and have a lower cost, they
D. Minivans, carrying as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less,
E. Minivans, which carry as many as seven passengers, compared with most sport utility vehicles the cost is lower, and they
为什么A是对的呢？这题束手无策，请指教
[[i] 本帖最后由 Rhine-3- 于 2008-9-4 02:17 编辑 [/i]] 为什么会觉得 A 不对？ 我觉得整个句子很乱 插入语 ？
[[i] 本帖最后由 Rhine-3- 于 2008-9-4 02:38 编辑 [/i]] compared with most sport utility vehicles 是插入语。删去这个插入语后，还有没有问题？ ::p4
启发的好！原来这么简单::p5
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[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]So dogged [/b][/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]were[/b] Frances Perkins’ investigations of the garment industry, [u]and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent,[/u] Alfred E. Smith and Franklin D. Roosevelt recruited Perkins to work within the government, rather than as a social worker.[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent,[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]and lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, so that[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]her lobbying for wage and hour reform persistent, that 我凭感觉是C 但是此题众说纷纭 请指教:loveliness: [/b][/size][/font][/size]
[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]D.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]lobbying for wage and hour reform was so persistent,[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]so persistent[/b] her lobbying for wage and hour reform, that [b]某前人说So dogged were ..., (and) so persistent (were) ..., that ... 请指教:loveliness: and 能省略吗？[/b][/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][size=5]The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have [u]contact with it directly with[/u] an [i]ichana[/i] (dream) experience.[/size][/size][/font]
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[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]A.
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]direct contact with it by way of 同上[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]contact with the last directly through directly 离 contact 远了吧 [/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]direct contact with the latter by means of 避免代词指代不清 读起来舒服[/b][/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]contact directly with the mystical level due to 感觉复杂[/size][/font][/size]
请指教:loveliness:
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[color=red][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b][size=5]GWD5-Q14:[/size][/b][/size][/font]
[/color][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][size=5]Even though [b]more[/b] money was removed out of stock funds in July [u]as in any month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as[/u] an industry trade group had previously estimated.[/size][/size][/font]
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[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]A.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]as[/b] in[b] any month[/b] since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as 前面有了more后面应该有个呼应 than [/size][/font][/size]
[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]B.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]as[/b] had been in any other month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as what 同上[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]than there was in any other month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as [b]that which[/b] 不好[/size][/font][/size]
[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]D.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]than in[b] any month[/b] since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as[/size][/font][/size]
[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]E.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][b]than in any other month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as what 觉得： other是在同范围内比较，排除了自己July。what做了estimate 的宾语 [/b][/size][/font][/size]
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[size=5][color=#8b0000][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][color=#000000]GWD6-Q2：普遍选A[/color][/size][/font]
[/color][/size][u][color=black][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]According to its proponents,[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt] a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming[/size][/font][/b][b][font=宋体][size=9.5pt]早期获利[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt] along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.[/size][/font][/b][/color][/u]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]A.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]According to[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt] its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.[/size][/font]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.[/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]C.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, [b][color=#339966]with it skimming[/color][/b] along the top of the atmosphere. [/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]D.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours [b][color=blue]because of[/color][/b] its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.[/size][/font][b][font=宋体][size=9.5pt]原文没有[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]bacause[/size][/font][/b][b][font=宋体][size=9.5pt]的意思[/size][/font][/b][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]
[/size][/font][/b][b][font=宋体][size=9.5pt]改变愿意[/size][/font][/b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]E.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere [b][color=green]makes it possible[/color][/b] that a proposed new style of aircraft[b][color=green] could[/color][/b] fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.[/size][/font]
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每个选项的致命错误在哪里呢？辛苦辛苦::p7
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[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt][u]Concerns about public health led to the construction[b][color=red] between 1876 and 1904 [/color][/b]of three separate sewer systems to serve[/u][/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt] metropolitan Boston.[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve[/size][/font][/size]
[size=5][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]B.
[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]Concerns about public health [b][color=blue]have led[/color][/b] to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]
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[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]Concerns about public health [b][color=blue]have led [/color][/b]between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving[/size][/font][/size]
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[/size][/font][b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]There were[/size][/font][/b][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt] concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving[/size][/font][font=Tahoma][size=9.5pt]
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[font=Tahoma][size=5]关于时态，我觉得时态就是过去时，没必要是现在完成吧[/size]
[size=5][color=darkorange][/color]There were的表述是否是错误[/size][/font]
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[font=Tahoma][size=4][color=blue][b]看前人的帖子，有个说法，“be 和实义动词 不能并列” 和 “系表结构 和 动词结构可以平行”[color=black] 矛盾了吧？[/color][/b][/color][/size][/font]
[font=Tahoma][b][size=4]eg: ........[color=teal]is[/color] a distant relative of T [color=blue]and[/color] [color=green]resembles[/color].......... 这是正确句的一部分。我好像有个印象，resembles是系词不是实义动词吧？[/size][/b]
请指教:loveliness:
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[[i] 本帖最后由 Rhine-3- 于 2008-9-4 20:13 编辑 [/i]] ......
为什么我的GWD的题号里对应的题目和大家讨论的完全不一样呢。。。。
疯了。。。。 MM
你别急
你做得是GWD-TN-24吗？
我做的是这个
还有呀
你去CD搜吧
一定能搜到
TS有点乱的:loveliness:
[[i] 本帖最后由 Rhine-3- 于 2008-9-4 11:13 编辑 [/i]] 我做的是GWD-31......
是不是现在都么得人做这个了~？
都改做24啦？....... ＧＷＤ还是挺有用的． [color=DarkGreen]So [b]dogged were[/b] Frances Perkins’ investigations of the garment industry, [u]and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent,[/u] Alfred E. Smith and Franklin D. Roosevelt recruited Perkins to work within the government, rather than as a social worker.
A. and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent,
B. and lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, so that
[b]C. her lobbying for wage and hour reform persistent, that 我凭感觉是C 但是此题众说纷纭 请指教[/b]
D. lobbying for wage and hour reform was so persistent,
E. [b]so persistent[/b] her lobbying for wage and hour reform, that [b]某前人说So dogged were ..., (and) so persistent (were) ..., that ... 请指教 and 能省略吗？[/b][/color]
E 是正确的，不过 and 前应该没有逗号。这是因为这句是说因为她如此如此，所以州长、总统把她纳入**，免得她在外面兴风作浪，所以 persistent 也要加 so 来说明“如此”。
这里的 and 是可以省略的，特别是多了个逗号就省略了好一些。不过省略了就很文言。
C 不对因为 her lobbying for wage and hour reform persistent 变成了插入成份，而这个插入成份却不是说明前面的，所以不能这样用。
[[i] 本帖最后由 Asrgbf 于 2008-9-4 08:16 编辑 [/i]] [color=DarkGreen]GWD5-Q4:
The Quechuans believed that all things participated in both the material level and the mystical level of reality, and many individual Quechuans claimed to have [u]contact with it directly with[/u] an ichana (dream) experience.
A. contact with it directly with it 让人不舒服 指代问题吧
B. direct contact with it by way of 同上
C. contact with the last directly through directly 离 contact 远了吧
D. [b]direct contact with the latter by means of 避免代词指代不清 读起来舒服[/b]
E. contact directly with the mystical level due to 感觉复杂
请指教[/color]
it 从语境可以看到是什么，所以不是指代不清。
A 错是因为 directly with 不对，应该是 directly through，像 C 那样。但是 C 也是不对，因为不是 last，应该用 latter。B 错是因为 by way of 用词不当，不地道。E 的 due to 也是用词不当。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD5-Q14:
Even though [b]more[/b] money was removed out of stock funds in July [u]as in any month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as[/u] an industry trade group had previously estimated.
A. [b]as[/b] in [b]any month[/b] since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as 前面有了more后面应该有个呼应 than
B. [b]as[/b] had been in any other month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as what 同上
C. than there was in any other month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as [b]that which[/b] 不好
D. than in [b]any month[/b] since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as
E. [b]than in any other month since October 1987, sales of fund shares in July were not as low as what 觉得： other是在同范围内比较，排除了自己July。what做了estimate 的宾语[/b] [/color]
这题没有什么好争议的地方。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD6-Q2：普遍选A
[u]According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming早期获利 along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.[/u]
A. According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
B. By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
C. A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
D. A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.原文没有bacause的意思 改变愿意
E. According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours. 重复
每个选项的致命错误在哪里呢？辛苦辛苦[/color]
那个“早期获利”是谁加进去的？根本不是这个意思！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
B 错是因为 by skimming along the top of the atmosphere 的是 proponents！
C 错是因为 with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere 这样放就变成 proponents proposed 时这部飞机在大气层顶处掠过。
D 错不是因为原文没有这个意思。所谓原文没有是很主观的，不成理由。D 错是因为 because of its skimming . . . 不地道，不是好英文。要用 because 就这样写：A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because it can skim along the top of the atmosphere. 不过这样句子有点不够平衡。
E 错因为 according to its proponents 后面必须用主语开始，不能来个 prepositional phrase。
所以只剩下 A 一个可以选。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD6-Q17:
[u]Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve[/u] metropolitan Boston.
A. Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
B. Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C. Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
D. There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
E. There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
这个题讨论地很乱，我的问题是：
关于时态，我觉得时态就是过去时，没必要是现在完成吧
There were的表述是否是错误
看前人的帖子，有个说法，“be 和实义动词 不能并列” 和 “系表结构 和 动词结构可以平行” 矛盾了吧？
eg: ........is a distant relative of T and resembles.......... 这是正确句的一部分。我好像有个印象，resembles是系词不是实义动词吧？[/color]
Present perfect 的意义是这个动作一直维持到现在，所以这里不能用 present perfect 的。D 不对因为 leading to . . . 没有主语。应该这样：There were concerns about public health in Boston in the 1870's, which led to . . . .
E 比 D 更坏，连那个 about public health 也没有了。
英语系词就只有一个 be。have 有时像系词，但是有时有实义。此外就是 modal verbs：can、will、shall、should、would、may、might 那些。Resembles 也不是这些，是名正言顺的实义动词。至于所谓平行不平行，不要信那些说法。我一直在说，没有所谓平行的，只是要看省略部份能不能衔接。 is a distant relative of tyrannosaurus and resembles . . . 完全正确。所以不要再用平行来做衡量的标准了。 up up up [color=DarkGreen]GWD6-Q30: C
Though subject to the same wild-animal control efforts that killed off almost all the wolves in North America over the past century, the [u]coyote’s amazing ability of adapting to the presence of humans has enabled it to expend its[/u] range into Alaska and Central America.
A. coyote’s amazing ability of adapting to the presence of humans has enabled it to expend its
B. coyote, because of its amazing ability of adapting to the presence of humans, have been able to expand their
C. coyote, because of its amazing ability to adapt to the presence of humans, has been able to expand its
D. amazing ability of the coyote to adapt to the presence of humans have enabled it to expand the
E. amazing ability of the coyote to adapt to the presence of humans has enabled it to expand the
我的问题：
最后排除完了剩C E , 可是我觉得它们都很复杂啊
C because of 后面一堆东西，一开始想直接改成because 从句，但是一看这个插入成分是在 转折句里的，改了之后是不是破坏了人家的结构。
Though....... , the coyote............是一体，在那加because从句很别扭吧
E 虽然复杂碍眼，但是挺顺的啊，怎么改写比较好？
另：
the AM-1 is one of the many new satellites that is a part of 15 years effort of subjecting the interactions of Earth’s atmosphere, oceans, and land surfaces
to detailed scrutiny from space.
我总是感觉 介词短语后面跟一堆东西就不舒服 就想排除 可是这些选项有的时候还是对的 ， 我这种想法是不是有问题啊？[/color]
C 和 E 都没有问题。唯一可以排除 E 的是最后那个 the 应该用 its。因为前面没有提到 range，所以不能用 the range。这题非常阴险！
C 里面的 because of its amazing ability to adapt to the presence of humans 是后分句的状语，与 though 没有关系，所以这样用没有问题的。英语插入成份是很普遍的，不过不能用得多。如果一段里面句句都是插这插那，就变成 Henry James 那样的讨厌英文。但是偶然用用则可以调剂一下，不那么单调。
英语是后修饰的，只要是后修饰就不怕长。最忌的是像中文那样前修饰，写得坏的英文通常就是前面太多东西。你看，这句后修饰得多长！
This is the farmer, all weary and worn,
That owned the cock that crowed in the morn,
That waked the priest, all shaven and shorn,
That married the man, all tattered and torn,
That kissed the maiden, all forlorn,
That milked the cow with the crumpled horn
That tossed the dog
That worried the cat
That killed the rat
That ate the malt
That lay in the house
That Jack built.
英语利用 relative pronoun，可以把分句像铁链一样一环一环地连下去。中文却不一样，而是好像箱子一样，箱子里面套箱子，成为很复杂的包孕句：
隔篱二叔婆说张三姑知道李四婆一天到晚对人说她的坏话非常不高兴。
所以要习惯看那些复杂的句子，还要学会分辨哪些句子复杂得不能容忍，哪些却没有问题。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD7-Q3:A
The state has proposed new rules that would set minimum staffing levels for nurses, [u]rules intended to ensure that at least one nurse is assigned for every four patients put through triage in a hospital emergency room[/u].
A. rules intended to ensure that at least one nurse is assigned for every four patients put through triage in a hospital emergency room
B. rules with the intent of ensuring one nurse at least to be assigned for every four patients to be put through triage in a hospital emergency room
相比之下，感觉A好就选了，但是对B的错误，不是很明了
1 rules with the intent of 这个表达我觉得是对的 ?
2 one nurse at least 与 正确项的差别
3 又回到上一题的问题 介短后面的一堆东西
4 ensure that....... 和 ensure + n. 没有查到[/color]
rules with the intent of 不是不可以，就是不顺口，还是 A 那样才好。
one nurse at least 是错误，排除 B 就是因为这处。这里必须说 ensuring (that) at least one nurse is assigned。
介词后可以跟什么没有什么推诸四海而准的规则的，要一句一句地看。
ensure 是和 that 同用的，不过 that 可以省略。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD7-Q4:
Only seven people this century have been killed by the great white shark, the man-eater of the [u]movies—less than those[/u] killed by bee stings.
A. movies—less than those those代替people less不能修人
B. movies—fewer than have been
C. movies, which is less than those 貌似 ,the man-eater of the movies, 变成一个插入语，也不能形容前半句，且which is less than those也不对
D. movies, a number lower than the people
E. movies, fewer than the ones
这种带破折号的题，第一次见，我觉得的B对[/color]
如果没有 the man-eater of the movies 的话，E 也是对的。 ::86 ::83 要加油！ [color=DarkGreen][u]There are no legal limits, as there are for cod and haddock, on the size of monkfish that can be caught, a circumstance that contributes to their depletion through overfishing[/u]. 答案A
A. There are no legal limits, [color=Blue]as there are for cod and haddock,[/color] on the size of monkfish that can be caught, a circumstance that contributes to their depletion through overfishing. [color=Blue]我选它的时候把 蓝色部分去掉了，觉得挺顺。这样判断行吗？自己觉得别的选项错误明显，但是看CD讨论帖说了好多啊。 乱糟糟的。[/color]
B. There are no legal limits on the size of monkfish that can be caught, unlike cod or haddock, a circumstance that contributes to depleting them because they are being overfished.
C. There are legal limits on the size of cod and haddock that can be caught, but not for monkfish, which contributes to its depletion through overfishing.
D. Unlike cod and haddock, there are no legal size limits on catching monkfish, which contributes to its depletion by being overfished.
E. Unlike catching cod and haddock, there are no legal size limits on catching monkfish, contributing to their depletion because they are overfished.[/color]
是的，可以在删去插入成份后看整句如何。不过不用忽略插入成份是否正确。
B 口齿不清，不必理会。D 的 unlike cod and haddock 分明与后面不能配搭起来。E 没有 D 前面的问题，但是却用了 contributing . . . 。这里不能用，必须像 D 那样。
唯一麻烦的是 C。C 只有一处出错，就是那个 its 不对，应该用 their。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD-9-Q15:
答案给的A 我选了D
Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shortleaf, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of [u]twenty-two, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become[/u] too ill to serve.
A. twenty-two, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become
D. twenty-two, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was
Q：
1 选D injured好像不对 was injured 更好吧 因为后面是 and was
2 A 中的 had become 让我实在是纠结啊[/color]
injure 是去伤人，当然不对，应该用被动式。
她老了、弱了，是在退伍以前的事，那就当然要用 past perfect。有什么纠结？ 谢谢老大
汗颜::z8 up 加油 [color=DarkGreen]According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
看到讨论帖里有人说According to 的后面接什么成分的问题，比较::18，有人说不用考虑主语，有的说必须是主语…… ::85 的Q[/color]
According to 里面的 according 不是动词的 participle。According to 是介词，所以 according to its proponents 是介词词组，和 participle phrase 完全不同。According to 后面跟着的名词，就是说后面的话的人。不然怎么成 according to？
According to my mother, I was able to recognize Chinese characters when I was two. However, I do not believe her.
According to students who live in that dormitory, the ghosts there are quite ferocious.
According to Alan, his eyelids twitch whenever Betsy is within ten meters of him.
我写了上面几句，倒觉得如果要 according to 的人是后面的主语，句子可不容易写！ [color=DarkGreen]So dogged were Frances Perkins’ investigations of the garment industry, so persistent her lobbying for wage and hour reform[color=Red], that[/color] Alfred E. Smith and Franklin D. Roosevelt recruited Perkins to work within the government, rather than as a social worker.
这个句子前几天问过，但是今天再看下红字部分的that，是？[/color]
这个 that 是连词。 +U+U [color=DarkGreen]GWD-10-Q1.
According to a survey of graduating medical students conducted by the Association of American Medical Colleges, [u]minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than are other graduates in planning to practice[/u] in socioeconomically deprived areas.
[b][color=Blue]Black Americans are, on the whole, about twice[/color] as likely as [color=Blue]White Americans[/color] to [color=Blue]develop high blood pressure. This likelihood also holds for westernized Black Africans when compared to White Africans.[/color][/b][color=Blue][/color]
A. minority graduates are nearly [color=Purple]four times more likely than[/color] [color=Red]are[/color] other graduates [color=Brown]in planning to[/color] practice
B. minority graduates are nearly four times more likely than other graduates who plan on practicing
C. minority graduates are nearly [color=Purple]four times as likely as[/color] other graduates [color=Brown]to plan on[/color] practicing
D. it is nearly four times more likely that minority graduates rather than other graduates will plan to practice
E. it is nearly four times as likely for minority graduates than other graduates to plan to practice
1、蓝字部分是某人给出的例子，因为他支持选C，这题讨论的乌烟瘴气
2、我选的是A，其主要原因就是因为有[color=Red]are[/color]
3、请师公把彩色字的部分讲下吧[/color]
首先，A 和 C 的意义不同的。比如 other graduates who plan to practice in socioeconomically deprived areas 的数目是 [i]n[/i]，minority graduates 的数目在 A 就是 5[i]n[/i] 而在 C 则是 4[i]n[/i]。（不过很多人都不知道有这个分别。）
A 那个 are 是错的。如果要用 are，就要放在 other graduates 后面，不然主语就会沿用前面的 minority graduates。
C 是对的，就是意思不同。但我不知道出题者知不知道有分别。[/color]
[[i] 本帖最后由 Asrgbf 于 2008-9-9 09:16 编辑 [/i]] [color=DarkGreen]GWD-10-Q16
While digging in the Egyptian desert, [u]huge fossil bones have been found by paleontologists, which appears to have been[/u] the second most massive dinosaur that ever lived.
D. paleontologists have found huge fossil bones from what appears to be
E. paleontologists have found huge fossil bones, which are from what appear to be
题目的原型是：纽约时报的一句话改动：
Digging at an oasis in the Egyptian desert, paleontologists have found huge fossil bones of what they say appears to have been the second most massive dinosaur that ever lived.
1、我选的D，但是我搞不清from还原在哪里 what应该引导的是主从.....
2、E有点啰嗦吧[/color]
E 写得不好。这样就不啰嗦了：. . . bones, which appear to be the remains of the second most massive dinosaur that ever lived.
D 那个 from 不对 虽然意思明显，但是不 idiomatic。 [color=DarkOrange]In[/color] [color=DarkGreen]analyzing campaign expenditures, the media have focused on.............................
in 不明白[/color]
这是 idiiomatic usage，英语就是这样说的。意会就够了，不必每一个词都去分析。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD-10-Q21
Despite the [u]growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers will still[/u] use travel agents.
A. growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers will
B. growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, that many travelers would
C. growing number of people purchasing plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers as compared to automatic teller machines, many travelers will
D. fact that the number of people purchasing plane tickets online is growing, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers as compared to automatic teller machines, that many travelers would
E. fact that the number of people who purchase plane tickets online are growing, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers compared with automatic teller machines, many travelers would
如下疑问S： 觉得这题乱糟糟
1 在OG里，growing number 不受宠 ，可是我排除ABC的时候，只是觉得DE更舒服些
2 都是are convinced ，后面跟 will 好于 would
3 一开始E 中are错了，这样一来，选哪个好呢？[/color]
A 正确。Growing number 没有问题的。convinced 后面一定要有 that，因为有插入成份。E 除了 are 错了以外，那个 compared with 也是不对的。 [color=DarkGreen]GWD-11-14
The single-family house constructed by the Yana, a Native American people who lived in what is now northern California, was conical in shape, its framework of poles overlaid with slabs of bark, either cedar or pine, and [color=DarkGreen]banked with dirt to a height of[/color] three to four feet.
A. banked with dirtto a height of 1 选这个和overlaid平行,修饰framework，构架倾斜 且 to a height of 是个固定搭配
B. banked with dirt as high as that of
C. banked them with dirt to a height of
D. was banked with dirt as high as 2 选这个 was banked 和 was 平行，共同修饰house ，房屋倾斜
E. was banked with dirt as high as that of
哪个好呢？一般都说house倾斜吧？1& 2 请指教[/color]
看这里：[url]http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread.php?tid=1114017[/url] [quote]原帖由 [i]Asrgbf[/i] 于 2008-9-10 05:01 发表 [url=http://www.taisha.org/bbs/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=12768653&ptid=1129562][img]http://www.taisha.org/bbs/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
GWD-10-Q21
Despite the growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic t ... [/quote]
[color=darkorange][b]convinced 后面一定要有 that，因为有插入成份。[/b][/color]
[b][color=#ff8c00][/color][/b]
[b][color=#ff8c00]师公的意思是说如果没有插入成分就可以不要THAT吗？[/color][/b]
[b][color=#ff8c00]convince 后面接从句必须要有THAT引导吗？还是和后面是否有插入成分有关系呢？::z2 [/color][/b]
[[i] 本帖最后由 Rhine-3- 于 2008-9-10 11:32 编辑 [/i]] convinced 后面如果要跟东西，就要用 that 开头，但是这个 that 可以省略。在这句里，因为有插入语，that 省略了就不顺。放在插入语后面更不顺。 哦了~！疑问解开::86 ::83
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我觉得A有问题啊，Minivans carry as many as seven passengers and, compared with most sport utility vehicles, cost less, get better gas mileage, allow passengers to get in and out more easily, and have a smoother ride. 这个句子中carry and cost , get , allow , and have 怎么能并列呢？？相反，D选项的结果就比较清晰 为什么不能并列？都是动词，主语又都是 minivans。你们就是不要信那些什么平行的话。在语法里面根本没有这个概念的。只要句子成份相同，就可以并列的了。
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