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^5.5分周末party8月组^第五次作业!!!!

^5.5分周末party8月组^第五次作业!!!!

issue:
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"Government should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development"
203
"The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines."
argument:
36The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist.

"Twenty years ago Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia and concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. However, my recent interviews with children living in the group of islands that includes Tertia show that these children spend much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. This research proves that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture is false, and thus that the observation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid. Because they are using the interview-centered method, my team of graduate students working in Tertia will establish a much more accurate understanding of child-rearing traditions there and in other island cultures."



200Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients.


提纲:
issue:
5"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."


argument:
34Milk and dairy products are rich in vitamin D and calcium, substances essential for building and maintaining bones. Many people therefore believe that a diet rich in dairy products can help prevent osteoporosis, a disease in which the bones weaken significantly with age and that is linked to both environmental and genetic factors. But a long-term study of a large number of people has found that those who have consistently consumed dairy products throughout the years of the study have a higher rate of bone fractures than any other participants in the study. Since bone fractures are a symptom of osteoporosis, this study result shows that a diet rich in dairy products may actually increase, rather than decrease, the risk of osteoporosis.

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回复 1# pippin 的帖子

8组22号
先传A吧,由于I写的是另外两篇就不上传了,A暂时就写一篇吧!辛苦改作业的同学哈,希望多批评指正!

[ 本帖最后由 skylinezgr 于 2008-7-7 16:50 编辑 ]
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啊。。我提一下我的观点。
1.咱们组也有7月份就要考的同学,再推下去就没机会写了。
2.作文不是一遍就定型了,写完了是要修改的,早一点练习高频,更有机会多思考多修改,举重点而反其他。

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先交一篇I吧 呵呵

[ 本帖最后由 aksummer 于 2008-7-5 21:20 编辑 ]
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嘿嘿,终于逮到你楼下的位子了~~~

谢谢卡夏的修改~谢谢ZELA的资料~~~

后两篇是修改灵儿的作业,自己没写全,so改的也够不深刻,见谅了。

[ 本帖最后由 AthenaQueeny 于 2008-7-12 17:38 编辑 ]
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没来得及写提纲

又乱说了一气,请指教^ ^

[ 本帖最后由 灵山巫 于 2008-7-16 14:25 编辑 ]
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谢谢修改的朋友!









楼下朋友的作业:

[ 本帖最后由 markhuang120 于 2008-7-10 18:23 编辑 ]
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交作业

楼下同学的修改作业

[ 本帖最后由 angeline_wu 于 2008-7-10 22:59 编辑 ]
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tutudoudou NO。21^5.5分周末party8月组^第五次作业

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no。21,刚才的错了。其他的不变

no。21,刚才的错了。其他的不变

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还差一Issue,怕登录不上去,先把我写的交了





[ 本帖最后由 ss1271 于 2008-7-7 18:26 编辑 ]
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我的两篇argument,谢谢批改!

上传我修改的offline的作业


[ 本帖最后由 ylfeng 于 2008-7-14 14:22 编辑 ]
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交作业,谢谢批改的同学

[ 本帖最后由 tongzhi 于 2008-7-8 20:08 编辑 ]
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第五次作业

thanking !帮我修改的人

[ 本帖最后由 offline 于 2008-7-9 08:51 编辑 ]
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第五次作业

感觉这次写的都不太好。。。
辛苦改我作业的同学了。。。
楼下的同学,不好意思,我改的晚了。。

[ 本帖最后由 sun3may 于 2008-7-10 17:30 编辑 ]
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写多少发多少吧。。
麻烦修改的同学了!~

再加两篇和一个提纲。。


真是无颜见楼下的啊。。拖到现在才交。。十分抱歉的说。。

[ 本帖最后由 evaxueqing 于 2008-7-12 22:46 编辑 ]
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先发这几篇吧,别的几篇还在整理中~

[ 本帖最后由 pjx 于 2008-7-9 18:11 编辑 ]
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to pinpin:
不差了,交齐了~~~








[ 本帖最后由 红宏 于 2008-7-8 01:33 编辑 ]
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我也还差一篇

[ 本帖最后由 pippin 于 2008-7-12 22:55 编辑 ]
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issue 69 作业

我是新手,请大家帮忙改改,issue 69 作业
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