That the working classes have worse olfactory sensibilities makes a sharp contrast to that the upper class have better olfactory preferences.




要不怎么改改？

[ 本帖最后由 rainstorm123 于 2008-10-1 13:54 编辑 ]

#############################################################################################

[ 本帖最后由 rainstorm123 于 2008-10-1 13:21 编辑 ]

引用:

原帖由 rainstorm123 于 2008-10-1 13:01 发表
That the working classes have worse olfactory sensibilities makes a sharp contrast to that the upper class have better olfactory preferences.




要不怎么改改？

the working classes with worse olfactory sensibilities makes a sharp contrast to that of the upper class with better blah blah...
the working classes having worse blah blah                                                                                             having better blah


personal opinions only

Do you mean

The working classes have worse olfactory sensibilities that make a sharp contrast for the upper class to have better olfactory preferences.

that用的不对

Having worse olfactory sensibilities, the working classes make a sharp contrast for the upper class to have better olfactory preferences.

好点没


?

[ 本帖最后由 ﹏︶ㄣ�]印 于 2008-10-1 13:20 编辑 ]

not exactly
我想说这两种现象make a contrast

发错版了  发到英语学习版
然后把你要表达的中文 说出来这样子别人才好改
我只是按照你英文 改了一下而已 因为

ennn

the working classes' worse olfactory sensibility makes a sharp contrast to the upper classes' ....

The working classes having worse olfactory sensibilities make a sharp contrast to the upper class that having better olfactory preferences.

就是对照两个东西？ 那个makes是你用错了还是我主语找错了？

en. ..
make是谓语
两个have是两个名词性从句的谓语