请各位先考得xdjm帮帮后来者吧: C% i3 `8 ]; G) }! X7 M
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2月13号上午8：45进去9：45走出厦门基金（机经？）楼101，终于感觉到阳光的明媚了。
# @* b( }2 ?2 C S也为我两个月的复习AW画上了句号。 L- |/ z+ Z5 B& W; d* x$ N
先说说考题：
7 K. m. ?& C+ P9 nIssue（1） 114."Humanity has made little real progress over the past century or so. Technological innovations have taken place, but the overall condition of humanity is no better. War, violence and poverty are still with us. Technology cannot change the condition of humanity." : B: g9 ~" f& g( Q* ^2 y6 A
（2）：184"It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data."
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34Milk and dairy products are rich in vitamin D and calcium, substances essent8 r; C, h/ {# G. a3 ~
ial for building and maintaining bones. Many people therefore believe that a diet rich in dairy products can help prevent osteoporosis, a disease in which the bones weaken significantly with age and that is linked to both environmental and genetic factors. But a long-term study of a large number of people has found that those who have consistently consumed dairy products throughout the years of the study have a higher rate of bone fractures than any other participants in the study. Since bone fractures are a symptom of osteoporosis, this study result shows that a diet rich in dairy products may actually increase, rather than decrease, the risk of osteoporosis.4 u2 m3 H6 e% }+ E. g; N
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issue写的是第一个，观点是反对。打字很快（键盘好！），最后居然还有3～4分钟检查，
" a1 w* Z& [9 l4 a) ]& ]# c! `先说不可否认technological innovations 确实带来了humanity中一系列的progress，然后又说war，2 m! |: Y0 j5 J- z: i+ S
violence不是由于technological innovations可以解决的而是由于人性决定的，最后来了个让步。思路还算
6 v' C) _" r9 U4 C5 S0 I1 d; j清晰，字数也该在0.5k以上。argument攻击了三个逻辑错误，字数在0.4k以上吧。个人觉得对于这类文章" N2 }% R( u! S4 a2 q9 L+ a
思路重要性大
寂寞
已经记不得坐在这跷跷板上有多久了，有点无聊，有点寂寞，有点迷惘……只为了比你们更高一点，更接近皎洁的月亮，我只好坚强地假装：这样比较快乐，比较棒，风吹过，好冷，屁股好痛，尿好急……
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