请牛人们狠狠地拍

There are many different ways to study. Nowadays, some people support to learn in a serious and formal way, which is also the most traditional way. However, another way of learning is accepted by other people----an entertaining and enjoyable way. I choose the second one since I am a student and I really feel the benefits of learning in an enjoyable way.

First of all, an entertaining way is more interesting and attractive for learners. Because of the variety styles of teaching, such as playing games, showing pictures and watching videos, students can be interested in studying and treat learning as playing. As long as the attitude of learning changed, the effect of learning will increase much more.

Another reason why I choose an enjoyable way is that it makes people understand what they are learning easier. Through diversity of activities, students can either memory information or practice what they have learned immediately. Obviously, practicing knowledge in daily life is much more effective than looking at blackboard or books. If students know how to use the knowledge, of course they have understood it.

Not only is an enjoyable way of learning effective for understanding, but it is also useful for team work. To illustrate, during activities, students usually work with a partner or in a group. In this case, they have to know how to accompany or lead others' work, which is an essential ability for team work. An entertaining way of learning provides an excellent opportunity to exercise this skill.

In conclusion, an enjoyable way of learning is an interesting method for students to understand the knowledge and get the skill of team work. Although a serious and formal way can control students very well, those benefits I have stated above are not available in such a strict way. Therefore, to enjoy studying, just learn with happiness and entertainment.

[ 本帖最后由 colinchen88 于 2006-12-22 10:30 编辑 ]

收到,lz不要急.明天晚上弄......

[ 本帖最后由 Holsety 于 2006-12-20 21:54 编辑 ]

楼主不要着急,我们按顺序来,不会漏的

There are many different ways to(of) study. Nowadays, some people support to learn in a serious and formal way, which is also the most traditional way. However, another way of learning is accepted by other people----an entertaining and enjoyable way. I choose the second one since I am a student(太直白了不好） and I really feel the benefits of learning in an enjoyable way.

First of all, an entertaining way is more interesting and attractive for learners. Because of the variety styles of teaching, such as playing games, showing pictures and watching videos, students can be interested in studying and treat learning as playing. As long as the attitude of learning changed, the effect of learning will increase much more.

Another reason why I choose an enjoyable way is that it makes people understand what they are learning easier. Through diversity of activities, students can either memory information or practice what they have learned immediately. Obviously, practicing knowledge in daily life is much more effective than looking at blackboard or books. If students know how to use the knowledge, of course（避免绝对化词语） they have understood it.
Not only is an enjoyable way of learning effective for understanding, but it is also useful for team work(换个表达）. To illustrate, during activities, students usually work with a partner or in a group. In this case, they have to know how to accompany or lead others' work, which is an essential ability for team work（最好用一个单词teamwork ）. An entertaining way of learning provides an excellent opportunity to exercise this skill.

In conclusion, an enjoyable way of learning is an interesting method for students to understand the knowledge and get the skill of team work. Although a serious and formal way can control students very well（换个表达）, those benefits I have stated above are not available in such a strict way. Therefore, to enjoy studying（换个更好的目的）, just learn with happiness and entertainment.
个人觉得lz的文章已经还可以了，我这种菜鸟挑不出多少毛病了，等牛人吧……打分什么的我是没有说服力的，Jimmy来吧



[ 本帖最后由 Holsety 于 2006-12-22 18:44 编辑 ]

没从185里选,是泰德的模考题
谢谢批改,有空打个分吧

原题目是:Different people may prefer different learning styles when they attend class.While someone learns best in an entertaining and enjoyable way, others learn best in a serious and formal way. Which of these two learning styles do you prefer? Give specific reasons to support your answer

难啊。。。。。

lz我编辑完了再四楼，可能没有多少有建设性的意见，不好意思

接力

There are many different ways to(of) study.=> There are many different kind of students. Nowadays, some people support to learn in a serious and formal way, which is also不要 the most traditional way. However, another way of learning is accepted by other people要么不要,要么就说 accepted by majority 或者minority of people----an entertaining and enjoyable way. I choose the second one 推荐I prefer the later since I am a student(太直白了不好） and I really feel the benefits of learning in an enjoyable way. 直接用benefit from it. 建议你说一下哪些benefits.

First of all, an entertaining way is more interesting and attractive for learners通常指初学者. Because of the variety styles of teaching, such as playing games, showing pictures and watching videos , students can be interested in studying and treat learning as playing. As long as the attitude of learning changed, the effect of learning will increase much more.

Another reason why I choose an enjoyable way is that it makes people understand what they are learning easier. Through diversity of activities主语是activities, students can either memory information or practice what they have learned immediately. Obviously, practicing knowledge
in daily life is much more effective than looking at blackboard or books与之对应的应该是死记硬背. If students know how to use the knowledge, of course（避免绝对化词语） they have understood it.

句式)Not only is an enjoyable way of learning effective for understanding, but it is also useful for team work(换个表达）. To illustrate, during activities, students usually work with a partner or in a group. In this case, they have to 用learn to 更好 know how to accompany or lead others' work, which is an essential ability for team work（最好用一个单词teamwork ）. An entertaining way of learning provides an excellent opportunity to exercise this skill.

In conclusion, an enjoyable way of learning is an interesting method for students to understand the knowledge and get the skill of team work. Although a serious and formal way can control students very well（换个表达）, those benefits I have stated above are not available in such a strict way,你陈述严格的教育不具有这些有点的时候的时候,可以在举例子的时候指出. Therefore, to enjoy studying（换个更好的目的）, just learn with happiness and entertainment.

这次不给分
You can be better.

麻烦二位了
谢谢两位的批改

[ 本帖最后由 colinchen88 于 2006-12-22 10:40 编辑 ]

我觉得LZ的文章还可以啊~
简洁明了~
个人意见啊~
呵呵~

好好哦！我也可以把我写的东西拿上来请大家给知道啊！呵呵！

I was told five essential words throughout my life when I was a little girl which is ‘to be loved be lovable’. It has a considerably influence on my sense of self-value given that I understand that only to enjoy things I am compelled to master can I make a difference. Consequently, there is no room for doubt that I am preferable to select studying in a relax circumstance.

    Above all, the entertaining class makes it possible to arouse our interest on what we learn. As we all know that knowledge is tremendous boring sometimes and as a result we are probably lose heart on it and never be willing to touch it again. At last, there is a great difference between our primary purpose of being educated and the result. The attractive and diverting class atmosphere is able to avoid the negative effect.
   
    In addition, children can easily get the emphasis of the knowledge. The example can be simply held that the means of education exists contrarily between America and China. Let’s envision the picture in the two countries if a teacher wants to enable the children to pronounce ‘th’. The American teacher is likely to say that ‘Put your finger in front of your mouth and try to make your tongue to touch it. On the contrary, the Chinese will express just the abstract theory. There is no doubt about the consequences whose students get it at last.

    Last but not the least, it plays an significant role which enlighten the minds and thinking. We are not able to deny that keep the lesson vivid has a positive influence on the capability of comprehension and profound exploration of learners. Only the children put forward the question, discuss it and dispose of it by themselves can they really master the knowledge given by professors.

    The conclusion is readily drawn that convivial atmosphere make it possible for student to turn a lovable individual.

结尾去掉，太短了。

不够时间了嘛...