Clone or not clone
  Too often, human beings put too high an emphasis on one thing which may be beneficiary to temporary circumstance but the same time would be fatally undermine the substantial and emotional world to the core. The clone technology is superb an exemplar. So I totally against the so- called scientists and the technology they have created.
  With the advent of clone, we seem to be god ourselves and we have absolutely unlimited right to create everything just we hope to. What amazing! But when we have a deep thought through it we will find it may become a catastrophe. Just imagine that one day a “semiman” comes to your life and he is alike to one of your kin or friends. What will you do then? You may ask yourself” Is he a real man? Is he only a typofile or a monster like Frankenstein? Should I treat him what? ” The normal relationship and communication among human being are surely and doom be distorted. The ethical consequences will be serious and we might not confront it.
  Clone technology will also challenge the legal system. As we all know, the law is designed for human beings not for all the creatures in the world. But a real clone man turns up in your neighborhood, you dare thoroughly say that “He is not a man and of course not be protected by law!” Following the flooding of clone is following the mayhem of law.
  Thirdly, the virtues of sincerity, diligence, secretiveness, tenacity, and candor will certainly disappear without any trace. The omnipotent god endows these cherished virtues for us to utilize modest, whereas the arrogant human beings invent an evil technology to defense god and eventually give up all the virtues and ignore the god. What an appalling scene that people live without any affection but strife.
  The clone may also bring problem to human body. The sheep of Dolly died early and we don not know the reason why and how it died. The story of Dolly perfect illustrates the potential hazards lie in clone. We can never fight a wining battle without the information of enemies.
  As to other disarrays may arise by the clone technology are enormously substantial. It is quiet superficially to say that the clone is a gem without any flaws. To the contrary, it is just the opposite. I totally oppose the so called technology of clone.


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Too often, human beings put too high an emphasis on one thing which may be beneficiary to temporary circumstance but the same time would be fatally undermine the substantial and emotional world to the core. The clone technology is superb an exemplar. So I totally against the so- called scientists and the technology they have created.

  With the advent of clone, we seem to be god ourselves and we have absolutely unlimited right to create everything just we hope to. What amazing! But when we have a deep thought through it we will find it may become a catastrophe. Just imagine that one day a “semiman” comes to your life and he is alike to one of your kin or friends. What will you do then? You may ask yourself” Is he a real man?1.不要用you 句子,2. a real man 是男子汉的意思 Is he only a typofile or a monster like Frankenstein? Should I treat him what? ” The normal relationship and communication among human being are surely and doom be distorted. The ethical consequences will be serious and we might not confront it.

  Clone technology will also challenge the legal system. As we all know, the law is designed for human beings not for all the creatures in the world. But a real clone man turns up in your neighborhood, you dare thoroughly say that “He is not a man and of course not be protected by law!” Following the flooding of clone is following the mayhem of law.

Thirdly, the virtues of sincerity, diligence, secretiveness, tenacity, and candor will certainly disappear without any trace. The omnipotent god endows these cherished virtues for us to utilize modest, whereas the arrogant human beings invent an evil technology to defense god and eventually give up all the virtues and ignore the god. What an appalling scene that people live without any affection but strife.

The clone may also bring problem to human body. The sheep of Dolly died early and we don not know the reason why and how it died. The story of Dolly perfect illustrates the potential hazards lie in clone. We can never fight a wining battle without the information of enemies.

  As to other disarrays may arise by the clone technology are enormously substantial. It is quiet superficially to say that the clone is a gem without any flaws. To the contrary, it is just the opposite. I totally oppose the so called technology of clone. 多余


句式的多样性表现的很好.
注意,可以用we.....但是不要用you ,.,...有时候是对阅卷老师的不礼貌,

fight a losing battle.进行不可能成功的斗争 但是没有 fight a winning battle 一说.
请修改一下再发一篇上来

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真的很感谢啊~~~

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  Too often, human beings put too high an emphasis on one thing which may be beneficiary to temporary circumstance but the same time be fatally undermine the substantial and emotional world to the core. The clone technology is superb an exemplar. So I totally against the so- called scientists and the technology they have created.
  With the advent of clone, we seem to be god ourselves and have absolutely unlimited right to create everything just we hope to. What amazing! But when we have a deep thought through it we will find it may become a catastrophe. Just imagine that one day a “semiman” comes to our life and he is alike to one of our kin or friends. What should we do then? We may ask ourselves” Is he a real family number of mine or just a typofile of a monster like Frankenstein? Should I treat him what? ” The normal relationship and communication among human being are surely and doom be distorted. The ethical consequences will be serious and we might not confront it.
  Clone technology will also challenge the legal system. As we all know, the law is designed for human beings not for all the creatures in the world. However, if we see a tangible vivid clone child comes nearer when we are scrolling on the pavement, we would dare say that he or she is not protected by law? Definitely we can not. It, nevertheless, causes complete disarray, unhinged by the obscurely legal status of clone man.
   Thirdly, the virtues of sincerity, diligence, secretiveness, tenacity, and candor will certainly disappear without any trace. The omnipotent god endows these cherished virtues for us to utilize modest, whereas the arrogant human beings invent an evil technology to defense god and eventually give up all the virtues and ignore the god. What an appalling scene that people live without any affection and cooperation but merely crucial strife.
  The clone may also bring problem to human health. The sheep of Dolly died early and we don not know the reason why and how it died. The story of Dolly perfect illustrates the potential hazards lie in clone. We can never defeat our foes without the information of enemies.
  As to other chaos may arises by the clone technology are enormously substantial. It is quiet superficially to say that the clone is a gem without any flaws. To the contrary, it is just the opposite.

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Too often, human beings put too high an emphasis on one thing which may be beneficiary to temporary circumstance but the same time be fatally undermine the substantial and emotional world to the core. The clone technology is superb an exemplar. So I totally against the so- called scientists and the technology they have created.最好解释一下
  With the advent of clone, we seem to be god ourselves and have absolutely unlimited right to create everything just we hope to. What amazing!这种接近口语的句子少写. But when we have a deep thought through it we will前面是if find it may become a catastrophe. Just imagine that one day a “semiman” comes to our life and he is alike to one of our kin or friends. What should we do then? We may ask ourselves” Is he a real family number of mine or just a typofile of a monster like Frankenstein? Should I treat him what? ” The normal relationship and communication among human being are surely and doom be distorted. The ethical consequences will be serious and we might not confront it.
Clone technology will also challenge the legal system. As we all know, the law is designed 怎么能用design呢? for human beings 加个逗号,not for all the creatures in the world. However, if we see a tangible这样的生僻词少用 vivid clone child comes nearer when we are scrolling压马路吗?不是这样说的 on the pavement, we would dare用一个就OK say that he or she is not protected by
law?陈述句还是疑问句? Definitely we can not. It, nevertheless, causes complete disarray, unhinged by the obscurely legal status of clone man.
   Thirdly, the virtues of sincerity, diligence, secretiveness, tenacity, and candor will certainly disappear without any trace. The omnipotent god endows these cherished virtues for us to utilize modest, whereas the arrogant human beings invent an evil technology to defense god and eventually give up all the virtues and ignore the god. What an appalling scene that people live without any affection and cooperation but merely crucial strife.
  The clone may also bring problem to human health. The sheep of Dolly died early and we don not know the reason why and how it died. The story of Dolly perfect illustrates the potential hazards lie in clone. We can never defeat our foes without the information of enemies. !!多利是自己死的,但是克隆的人会让自己的主体死亡吗?不会.
  As to other chaos may arises by the clone technology are enormously substantial. It is quiet superficially to say that the clone is a gem without any flaws. To the contrary, it is just the opposite

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you can be better.