Nowadays,
the bulk of the students are probably confronted with the perplexity, whether to live with certain roommates or just him/herself entering the university. For the sake of personal backgrounds and distinct personalities, different individuals hold different points of view. Thanks to the personality of mine, my choice goes to the former one,
which is多余 participating a group in the dormitory instead of alone. Definitely, I am going to illustrate my concrete evidence to back up my notion.
The first and the foremost factor is that several friends living together enable us to
improve personality可以这样用吗?. It is universally acknowledged that most of the
teenagers are the sole children in their family in China. This fact increases the possibility that children are the center of the family, which enhance their selfish demerit. Consequently, living with others during the university period is a precious opportunity to withdraw
our negative personality. I am able to
make myself an example. Without optional choice, I share a single room with three classmates in the university dorm. For the fear of disturbing others and enabling them uncomfortable, I am compelled to reset my timing and spare no effort to prove my negative behavior. As a result, certain disadvantages of my personality are gotten rid of failing to be perceived. That special experience with my roommates indeed has a significant influence on my future life.
In addition, the subsequent point cannot be neglected to demonstrate the subject. Several individuals enable
you to gain the sense of belonging. Those who living together will possibly become brothers and sisters result from sharing one room. Most of us dread
of the feeling of isolation and loneliness without accompaniment of parents. The roommates are capable to assist you to keep that terrible emotion away. Hardly can you feel comfortable when you step in the dormitory devoid of single person, in my opinion.
Whereas, just like life is never full of roses and wines, roommates is not
able to be这里不是able to的问题 ideal as we expect
it to be去掉. There is no denying that it definitely will give rise to certain problems even conflicts owing to the different concepts.
You may also encounter the situation that the person living with you displays manners which you don’t favor不合适. While crisis can also be a pivot. Given that the possibility exists that it generates negative influence, what we are suppose to do is take the differentiation account in order to moderate it.
By and large, sharing the room with several mates is the way I suggest
to select多余. We will step into the complex society after graduating from university. At that moment, I am afraid that we will have no choice.
Thus, why not create an opportunity to practice ourselves so as to adapt to the community within a temporary period?扯到另外一个话题上面去了引用:
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还好
注意:you 句型慎用,you may also,换成one may also
少量的语法错误是允许的
文章基本上没有什么大问题了。
放心去考吧
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本帖最后由 benz2015 于 2006-12-28 23:19 编辑 ]